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From Jane Yolen's Attic by Marsha Diane Arnold

3/14/2014

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When I learned Jane Yolen and daughter Heidi Stemple were hosting their first ever Picture Book Boot Camp in Jane’s Victorian home in Massachusetts, I said to my husband, “I have to go.” In further explanation: “It would be as if you were an amateur astronomer and found out Carl Sagan or Neil deGrasse Tyson was doing a weekend workshop on the cosmos in their home. You’d have to go.”

My husband, always my supporter, responded, “Of course. You have to go.” 
So here I am sitting in Jane Yolen’s attic, writing this blog. The official name of the attic is The Aerie and it’s filled with three writing desks, hundreds of books, scores of awards, and the futon that will be my bed for the next three nights. You probably have to be a children’s writer to understand how magical this is. This is where Jane, called the Hans Christian Andersen of America, wrote many of her over 300 books. It overlooks the woods that inspired her Caldecott Medal book, Owl Moon. I am just going to inhale deeply and hope some of her brilliance seeps into my brain.

Sometimes a writer has to take a break, a little time to breathe. That’s what I’m doing this weekend, along with nine other “campers.” Next month I’ll exhale and share some of my insights about Jane’s camp, but tonight I’ll leave you with three quick ways to help make characters memorable and engaging.

1) Character Names. In my Word program is a folder filled with lists of hundreds of character names. When I hear or read a unique or interesting name, I add it to the list. Recently I met a young boy named Soul. I’m quite sure his name will find its way into a book some day.

Mostly, to find great character names, I simply keep my antenna up, but you can also search through phone books or baby name books. There are name generators on the Internet that can be fun too. Just Google “name generator” and see what pops up.

When you choose a name for your character, fit it to your character’s personality and the style of your story. I’m working on a manuscript (it’s actually one of the two Jane critiqued for me today) that’s a tall tale. My character’s name is Freddie Stufflebean. A name like Archibald Whiting just wouldn’t do.

2) Character Tags

Character tags are a device that helps make your character distinctive. It might be a mannerism, a passion, an obsession, a fear, a hobby, or a way of talking. Rodney Rat, in Hooway for Wodney Wat, pronounces his r’s like w’s, which leads to some serious misunderstandings. His speech endears him to us and helps us to never forget him.  In adult literature, an example of a character tag is Zorro’s mask and cape.

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3) Catchphrases

 A catchphrase is a phrase that’s easy to remember and is commonly used to represent a person, like “Elementary, My Dear Watson” from Sherlock Holmes. In my book Roar of a Snore Jack’s plea to “Stop that snore!” might be considered a catchphrase. It’s repeated over and over in the story. That’s part of what makes a catchphrase, the repeatability. Dr. Seuss’ books are filled with catch phrases. Think “I do not like green eggs and ham. I do not like them, Sam-I-Am.”

Well, “That’s all folks!” (Porky Pig’s catchphrase.)

Next month I will share more stories from Jane Yolen’s attic.


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  • Marsha Diane Arnold is an award-winning picture book author with eleven traditional books, two digital apps, and an e-book to her credit. Represented by Red Fox Literary, in 2013 she sold four picture book manuscripts to Neal Porter Books, Kate O'Sullivan of Houghton Mifflin, and Tamarind, Random House UK. She grew up on a Kansas farm, but today creates imaginative worlds and wacky characters in northern California surrounded by her garden, deer, hummingbirds, turkeys, oaks, and redwoods. Marsha's course Writing Wonderful Character-Driven Picture Books has helped many published and aspiring writers to write stronger characters. You may read about her books, school visits, and life at www.marshadianearnold.com.

     


5 Comments
Charlotte Dixon
3/14/2014 06:20:46 am

Thank you, Marsha, for the inspiration in this post. I am excited for you taking part in Jane Yolen's Picture Book Boot Camp! I look forward to your future posts about this amazing opportunity.

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Angie Karcher link
3/14/2014 12:13:24 pm

Oh Marsha...what an experience! Yes, you had to go. Thank you for sharing about your time in Jane's attic and enjoy your life moment! Hugs!

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Virginia Rinkel link
3/14/2014 12:50:19 pm

Wow Marsha! So glad you fulfilled a dream and went to Jane's Boot Camp. I can only imagine how great you must be feeling and sponging it all in. Can't wait to hear more in later posts. Keep pondering the passion...

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RaChelle Lisiecki link
3/14/2014 11:00:55 pm

That is spectacular, Marsha. Just sleeping in an attic has got to be so inspiring! I can't wait to read more about this wonderful and exciting adventure you're on. Have fun!

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Marsha Diane Arnold link
3/21/2014 01:12:01 am

Thanks all. It definitely was fun sleeping in The Aerie. I look forward to recalling all the "juicy bits," as Mira would say, in next month's blog. I did try to audio record a lot, so that will help this old mind.

Miranda Paul has a very helpful blog on pacing this week. Jane's OWL MOON is mentioned. And yes, we did go searching for an owl, but as the book says, "Sometimes you see an owl and sometimes you don't." We didn't. :)

Miranda's link:
http://www.childrensbookacademy.com/11/post/2014/03/a-peek-at-pacing-12-picture-books-i-love.html

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