But what I also found is a hidden gem of a book that I think children's writers will love.
The first few chapters are really geared more toward education. However, chapters 5 and 6 are what hold valuable information.
Chapter 5: Fiction Lesson Sets: Ten Texts, Thousands of Possibilities
Chapter 6: Nonfiction Lesson Sets: Moving from Narrative to Informational Writing
Although these are only two chapters of the book, they actually take up over half of the book.
Shubitz basically takes ten recently published picture books and deconstructs them through multiple lenses. As an educator, the point is that we use picture books as our "mentor texts" to show students how the real published authors accomplish successful writing. And isn't that what we as potential children's authors do as well? (If you're smart, you do.)
Take a look at all the ways she analyzes these mentor texts. These charts showcase the lessons included for each type of craft move.
So if you are a writer wanting to become more effective in show don't tell, she gives you eight different lessons from eight different picture books that showcase this craft move.
If you are a nonfiction writer wanting to see how what effective leads and endings look like, she highlights ten different lessons with ten different picture books. (And actually it's twenty because leads and endings are separate.) And each type of lead and ending are different. For example a lead can open with a simile, or one that opens by developing setting, or an imagine type of lead, or a lead that opens with a letter to the reader.
Each lesson follows a structure:
Power Craft Move: (Such as Lead, Ending, Precise Words etc...)
Name the Craft: (Such as which type of leads: Simile, Developing a Setting, Imagine)
Why authors do this: (She explains the specific reason why authors would use this exact craft move.)
How to do this: (This part tells you which part of the book to study so you can see how the author does this.) This section also always ends with a part called "Invite the students" and includes questions to ask the students so they can begin thinking about how they can try this craft move.
For more information about Craft Moves and to preview the book online check it out at Stenhouse Publishers.
Mondays with Mira: A Concert in the Sand by Tami Shem-Tov, Rachelle Sandbank, and Avi Ofer
If you'd like to hear me sound even more Australian than usual because of a wicked cold, and learn about a wonderful picture book that you may not have heard about, do watch this short video. For writers, it shows one way of writing for children about an historical event that is both creative and soulful with dramatic pacing. The story is about intergenerational love, history and the founding of the Israel Philharmonic Orchestra all with a light and fun touch. Written by Tami Shem-Tov & Rachel Sandbank and illustrated by Avi Ofer, it's two thumbs up from me, Dr. Mira Reisberg!
We are so excited to be mixing things up at CBA, beginning with some delicious additions to the Blogfish. Meet our awesome bloggers!!
Here's our lineup:
1st Mondays begin with awesome multi-published former student Shirin Shamsi who will be focusing on Muslim and cultural kidlit.
2nd Mondays will feature super smart Melissa Stoller whose career is taking off with several new books.
3rd Mondays will feature Bryan Patrick Avery, published writer, man of mystery, and professional magician among other things.
4th Mondays will feature STEM, STEAM & SEL obsessed author Kourtney LaFavre sharing delightfully dorky, quirky, and fun info.
And 5th Mondays we'll be taking a break